Tonight, I am writing my blog that I will describe the mistakes I made in the writing midterm. I was so mad when I saw my grade, but I haven’t lost hope yet. I will not only do my best in the future to defeat my weaknesses but also avoid the errors that I did in the midterm.

·     I have problems with understanding Fragment.

·     I should pay more attention to punctuation.

·     I have to focus on the tenses.

For instance, I wrote in the midterm sentences with wrong tenses such as “ I was pretty since I was young” that why I should focus on the tenses.